No, because with that direct connection your speed controller would also be feeding the condenser fan and the compressor. You'd be better off with a relay to switch the fan between the direct feed and the speed controller.
Something with the relay coil across the compressor so it would come on with the system. Connect the fan input to the moving contact, the compressor input line (where you currently tap in schematic two - the yellow wires) to the normally open contact and the speed controller to the normally closed contact.
When the system is running, the power to the compressor will close the N.O. relay contacts and connect the fan motor to the full line voltage. When the system is not running, the relay will drop out and connect the can to the speed controller through the N.C. relay contacts.
-Pat
<edited to clarify after looking at schematic again...>