I would alter this conceptualization quite a bit. For example, voltage is not the "speed" of the electricity nor the path it wants to push or follow. Ohms is not amperage absorption, and the idea of what Amps are is a bit hard to follow. While I appreciate your explanation, and it seems you did a lot of thinking about it, I want to clarify it based on my experience and what may be easier to teach people.
VOLTAGE:
Voltage is the difference in potential energy between two points. Just like gravitational field creates different potential at different heights above the ground. What happens is when there is a difference in energy levels, a FORCE is created that tries to equalize the difference (make it zero). For people jumping off buildings, the potential difference in gravitational energy turns into MOTION and you fall, picking up speed until you hit the ground. For electrons, the difference in potential energy causes EMF or electromotive force which moves electrons.
Now, if you are using the water analogy, you can also think of voltage as say the height of a waterfall. You can have a very tall waterfall, or a short waterfall. The taller waterfall is like higher amount of voltage. Obviously the water analogy only goes so far... it is an analogy. But essentially when you have a battery, or a capacitor, or static electricity building up between 2 objects.... There is a separation of CHARGES which creates a voltage or potential energy difference between 2 points in space. At some point, whether you have a conductor between these points or not, if the voltage difference will get big enough it will want to jump across the path.
In the case of a battery, if you connect the 2 ends with a wire (conductive path) the electrons will flow quite easily from one side to the other. Now, if you have static electricity you will need very large voltages to build up before a spark is created across the gap... because air is a poor conductor.
So in summary, voltage is when you have a CHARGE DIFFERENCE across something. That's all. How you choose to connect things across the charge difference (what materials, objects, etc.) will result in properties that you can measure called AMPERAGE (the number of electrons passing by per second) and RESISTANCE (an intrinsic property of the material to allow electrons to pass through it).
RESISTANCE:
Materials have the ability to allow electrons to flow through easily (conductor) or more difficult (insulator). Metals typically are better conductors because of the presence of "free" electrons, so they are not as tightly bound to the atoms and can move around through the metal, exchanging places with the ones beside them, so that the metal overall remains the same but yet there is the ability for electrons being supplied on one side of the metal able to make their way to the other side. That's what happens in a wire.
When you have an insulator, the electrons cannot pass through easily. They are more tightly bound to their atoms. So in order to make the electrons flow, you will need a HIGHER VOLTAGE. The bigger the potential difference between the 2 sides of the insulator (or the thinner the insulator) at some point electrons will flow. But not many.... that's when AMPERAGE comes in, because Voltage, Amps and Resistance are all related by Ohm's law.
AMPERAGE:
So now imagine you have a VOLTAGE being applied across a material with a certain intrinsic property called RESISTANCE. The voltage creates a potential energy difference across the material, so electrons wish to move across the material. There is a force generated, wishing to move the electrons across. That force causes movement of the electrons but has nothing to do with the speed of the electrons, because if you have a large resistance, those electrons may still move with much difficulty through the material, if any move at all.
The amperage is the net amount of electrons moving per second across the wire, or the net amount of charge in Coulombs. Given the same amount of resistance in a wire, if you increase voltage across it by 10x, you will get 10x increase in the net number of electrons travelling across the wire as well. So in general, the more voltage you apply to something, the more amps will flow across it.
Using the water analogy, if you think of a water pipe..... If the resistance is the size of the pipe (diameter), then voltage is the pressure being applied to the water to move, and the amperage is how much water is flowing through the pipe per second. So imagine a very tiny pipe (high resistance), you apply pressure to one end. Call that pressure P (this is like the voltage). Now you measure the number of gallons flowing through the pipe past a certain point.... that's like your amperage.
Now imagine you increase the diameter of your pipe, make it 2x wider. You need less pressure to push the water through... less voltage is needed to get the same amount of flow! So if your resistance drops to 1/2, keeping same voltage (pressure), you increase amps 2x (more current). Now imagine you have the same pipe but all you do is increase pressure by 2x, then your flow rate or amperage will also increase by 2x.
Anyways, I hope this makes more sense.... Electricity is not always as intuitive, and we can't use macroscopic analogies to always understand microscopic atomic/quantum phenomenon. But this is a good start.