It's not obvious from your schematic but hopefully you are putting the circuit on the load side of the cutoff device (with some means of resetting it). You don't want all those resistive loads, reference current and comparator supply current drawing from the discharged battery.
If you do want it straight across the battery then you need to go CMOS, micropower reference, and take all the resistor values up by a few orders of magnitude.
By the way, you don't need to use a comparator for this application. You're not bothered about operating speed or open collector output so you can quite happily substitute a low voltage rail to rail CMOS opamp.