I think Q1 is upside down. It's a PNP, so the emitter should be connected to OD, and the collector to the mosfet gate. And there needs to be a high-value pulldown resistor on the gate.
So PB4 goes high, which turns on Q3, which turns on Q1 (but only if OD is high), which passes the high from OD to the mosfet gate, and that turns on the power. Isn't that what you want? If you bring PB4 low, that turns off Q3, and R4 turns off Q1, and the gate pulldown turns off the power.
R5 may need to be a higher value depending on how much current OD sources.
I think normally the protection mosfet gates don't have pulldown resistors because OC and OD are always active - either high or low, but never floating. But Q1 interrupts that because it can either source current to the gate, or not, but can't actively bring it low, and if you don't bring it low, it will stay high. It's just a charged capacitor, basically.
Edit: Make sure you connect to the right mosfet. If you don't, power can flow through the mosfet body diode even if the mosfet is off. What's shown in your schematic is correct. Just make sure that's how you've connected it.