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| There is a problem with the translation of my master thesis' English abstract |
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| Power-Electronics:
I don't know if I even understood everything correctly, but here's my take on it. It still needs a lot of editing for style and content, but at least it should be somewhat understandable now. Most of what I did was remove the unnecessary repetition and add some white space. Good luck. Abstract Line loss rate is an important parameter for quantifying grid transmission efficiency, and overall quality of power supply system. Primary causes usually include leakage, partial discharge, and illegal use of electricity, among others. Such losses cause both financial harm to power supply enterprises and danger to users. To solve the problem of line loss monitoring and troubleshooting in low-voltage stations, an abnormal loss detection system for power grids based on location is designed. In this paper, we design five kinds of line loss detection devices for different power supply areas: 1. Urban building meter boxes 2. Rural (residential?) meter boxes 3. Rural (residential?) transmission-line-side devices 4. Factory transformer tanks 5. Factory meter boxes This system locates faults by modeling the power network as a tree topology, and measuring at each node the total input power, branch line output power, and user power. Considering the system's wide distribution and system cost, the NB-IoT module is used for uploading data from each location. To ensure efficient transmission, the MQTT/HTTP protocol is used to communicate over the internet. An internet time service facilitates real-time synchronous monitoring, reducing calculation errors. By calculating the line loss rate of each node, the system can identify when and where the line loss exceeds usual or expected amount. This experiment (design?) proves that the system can make the current power industry line loss monitoring smarter, reducing workload. Keywords: Low-voltage power supply area; Line loss monitoring; Tree topology;NB-IoT; Fault point Locating; |
| amyk:
I must be used to reading Chinglish by now, since it's about as comprehensible as a lot of the datasheets from Chinese companies that I've seen. |
| CatalinaWOW:
I believe that correct translation in American English for "power supply enterprises" is "electric utilities", and "power supply system" would be "electrical distribution system". I don't know if you are trying to achieve a particular dialect of English or if those would be correct in other widely used dialects. |
| Gregg:
@ Newboy: Obviously you have thought about your topic extensively; but you need to convey this to your audience. I guess you are submitting this to native English speaking audiences whose thought processes differ from yours; there is nothing wrong with your thought process, it just doesn’t translate well. It may help to do a rough draft in outline form: 1. Define in detail the problem or whatever you are trying to accomplish [This focuses and sets the scope of your paper; it is very important to define the subject at the beginning of the paper] 2. Mention present conditions and what is being done to alleviate the problem indicated. [This doesn’t have to go into great detail, but must convey a need or desire for improvement] 3. Provide a list of possible solutions (stick to the problem stated). State why present solutions are not ideal. This part must be well organized and not confusing. 4. State your own solution along with its pros and cons and compare it to the present situation. Stating the negative aspects to your solution shows that you have been diligent in researching both the solutions and present problems. 5. Summarize your paper with projected cost effectiveness, long term reliability and overall efficiency. Remember to thank those who have helped you along the way….and pay it forward when you can. |
| China NewBoy:
I put the latest revision abstract in #0 I know there are still a lot of questions, I hope you can help me point them out ;D |
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