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China NewBoy:
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China NewBoy:
yesterday,My supervisor said that the English abstract part of my master's thesis is very poor, I don't know how to correct it.

Hope someone can help me

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Line loss rate is an important parameter for quantifying grid transmission efficiency, and overall quality of electrical distribution system, Primary causes usually include leakage, partial discharge, and illegal use of electricity, among others. Such losses cause both financial harm to electric utilities and danger to users. The current abnormal line loss detection methods are power line carrier detection and manual detection. because the watt-hour meters are installed at a fixed and dispersive location, the power line communication method is inconvenience. The clock in the watt-hour meters is inaccurate, it causes large errors in the calculation of line loss rate. Manual detection faces the problems of high labor cost and low efficiency.To solve the problem of line loss monitoring and troubleshooting in low-voltage stations, an abnormal loss detection system for power grids based on IoT is designed.

In this thesis, we designs five kinds of line loss detection devices for three kinds of power supply areas : 1.urban building; 2.rural residential; 3.factory area.This system locates faults by modeling the power network as a tree topology, and measuring at each node the total input power, branch line output power, and user power. Considering the system's wide distribution and system cost, the NB-IoT module is used for uploading data from each location. To ensure efficient transmission, the MQTT/HTTP protocol is used to communicate over the internet. An internet time service facilitates real-time synchronous monitoring, reducing calculation errors. By calculating the line loss rate of each node, the system can identify when and where the line loss exceeds usual or expected amount.This experiment proves that the system can make the current power industry line loss monitoring smarter, reducing workload.
IanB:
For one thing, I think "line loss" is "transmission loss" or "transmission losses".

I think for "partial discharge" you mean "corona discharge"?

You really need to find a native English speaker at your institution to help you. There is no way for anyone here to edit your text without risk of changing the meaning.
jimdeane:
Textcheck.com provides techncal editing services for a primarily asian market. I worked as an editor for them for a couple of years. The editors are people with demonstrated technical background related to that of the author. For example, as a physics master's student, I edited a lot of photonics papers.

An important note: They are not editing for scientific accuracy, but for technical language accuracy. They might give you feedback in the notes if something was ambiguous.
China NewBoy:

--- Quote from: jimdeane on January 19, 2022, 07:53:32 pm ---Textcheck.com provides techncal editing services for a primarily asian market. I worked as an editor for them for a couple of years. The editors are people with demonstrated technical background related to that of the author. For example, as a physics master's student, I edited a lot of photonics papers.

An important note: They are not editing for scientific accuracy, but for technical language accuracy. They might give you feedback in the notes if something was ambiguous.

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Thank you for your recommendation, but,  if it is calculated at 6 cents per word, I need to spend 1000RMB to complete the polish, it is too expensive for me
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