Yep, that looks sane for a nom. 12V or 24V system. Its worth noting that the SOT23-6 package variant with a REF input pin can be setup to read current in both directions, or toggled between reading forward and reverse current, and current overload merely causes the output to limit, so you *COULD* use this one for monitoring the current balance into/outof the battery. Sense the charging current with REF grounded, and if its zero, set REF to the voltage required to measure negative current, and measure the discharge current if any.
Also, I'd suggest a combo of the Figure 8-5 'Transient Protection Using a Single Transzorb and Input Clamps' and Figure 8-2 'Filter at the Input Pins', for robustness and also to smooth the current reading so you don't have to sample it so fast to get a valid average.