Why not coupled inductors? They're readily available in this rating.
The switching loop is... all over the place? Put the MOSFET, coupling cap, diode and output cap all right next to each other! Likewise, the input should be bypassed near the inductor (but this is a lower priority, as the inductor current is triangular, not square; basically the trace length from inductor to filter/bypass cap acts in series with it, so has little effect on circuit operation, but mind the voltage drop if you connect anything else along that path!).
Definitely, that MOSFET is fuckoff massive, like, even a '3055 would do here I think?
(Cute sidenote: NTF3055, MTP3055, etc. are MOSFETs, bearing no relation to the 2N or TIP3055 -- though they seem to have similarly enduring popularity and genericity!)
Tim